Opinions on my lyrics d00dz?

wow... it kept me hooked the whole time i was reading it! its really good and you have some talent! please don't stop because i know one day your going to be famous with lyrics like theses! They took my breath away and i am seriously jealous of your talent! My advise to you is to start a band! Then start making some vids and putting them on youtube or play at a local karaoke night or something... i can really see you becoming big!